Abdiel, Your poem was absolutely AMAZING! Your comparisons between Berwyn and Mexico, are so awesome! I think the comparisons really also help me get a better idea of who YOU really are! It shows that you are a boy of two different homes and backgrounds that seem so different, but come together in so may unique ways! The poem was crafted well, and it really helped me get to know who you really are, a lot better! It helped me better understand your perky personality! Overall, great poem, and I look forward to reading more of your poetry in the future, because you obviously have a gift.
Abdiel,
ReplyDeleteYour poem was absolutely AMAZING! Your comparisons between Berwyn and Mexico, are so awesome! I think the comparisons really also help me get a better idea of who YOU really are! It shows that you are a boy of two different homes and backgrounds that seem so different, but come together in so may unique ways! The poem was crafted well, and it really helped me get to know who you really are, a lot better! It helped me better understand your perky personality! Overall, great poem, and I look forward to reading more of your poetry in the future, because you obviously have a gift.